We were 2 years into the project of re-translating some classic bossa nova tunes by Tom Jobim before deciding that we have to tackle "Garota de Ipanema." At first reading, the existing translation from Norman Gimbel has a great lilt to it and is reasonably accurate.
Unlike many translations from the 60â€™s explosion of bossa nova this song starts by following the order and meaning of the original. The translation also does a wonderful job of replacing the open vowels of Portuguese with the harder sounds of English words.
But as I looked further, past the first verse, I thought there was a case for more accuracy. Poetry is not easy to translate, and this Gimbel translation is an absolute classic in its own right, but I thought there was something fundamental worth looking atâ€¦
Olha que coisa mais linda, mais cheia de graça,
í‰ ela menina, que vem e que passa
Num doce balanço, caminho do mar
Moça do corpo dourado, do sol de Ipanema, O seu balançado é mais que um poema
í‰ a coisa mais linda que eu já vi passar .
Ah, porque estou tão sozinho, ah, porque tudo é tão triste, ah, a beleza que existe
A beleza que não é só minha, que também passa sozinha
Ah, se ela soubesse, que quando ela passa, O mundo sorrindo se enche de graça
E fica mais lindo, por causa do amor
Chris Slater, a Portuguese translator and keen bossa musician, did a first, literal translation to work from:
Look, what a most pretty thing, most graceful,
She is the girl, who comes, who passes with a sweet swing,
(on the) way to the sea
Girl of a golden body, from the sun of Ipanema, her sway is more than a poem,
itâ€™s the prettiest thing that I ever saw go by.
Ah, why am I so alone, Ah, why is everything so sad? Ah the beauty that exists.
The beauty that isnâ€™t just mine, That also goes by alone.
Ah, if she knew, that when she passes by, the world fills with grace, smiling,
and becomes more lovely, because of love.
Norman Gimbel chose to return to the opening verse instead of pursuing the full meaning of the second section. This provides some lovely lyrics and rhymes including â€œBut each day when she walks to the sea, she looks straight ahead not at meâ€.
When we were working on many Jobim songs we found it necessary to alter the order of the songâ€™s content in order to get the scanning in the right placeâ€”and Gimbelâ€™s version is a perfect combination of lyric and tune.
But I like what Jobimâ€”and more so Vinicius de Moraesâ€”achieved. An acceptance of the beauty of youth, of men desiring a gorgeous womanâ€¦but including the loneliness that desire bringsâ€¦and then knowing that this beauty is not just for men, for this man or this woman, but for all of usâ€¦that a young womanâ€™s beauty is part of what makes life worth living.
I have written some unsuccessful songs, had a poem published and was once runner-up in a UK playwriting competitionâ€”so am no authority! What I have done with Chrisâ€™ help is to interpret what is actually there and kept re-writing so that the music and lyric join up.
As a long-time lover of bossa nova I hope this English version adds something to peopleâ€™s pleasure and respect. Regardless of what I think of the song, â€œGarota de Ipanemaâ€ is full of love, longing, sun and seaâ€”the wonderful bossa nova themes.
Garota de Ipanema
Watching so much graceful beauty
The girl who swings so sweetlyâ€™s walking
As she passes sheâ€™s only wanting the sea
Dark & gold from Ipanema, poetry cannot describe her
The way sheâ€™s swaying - the best of swaying Iâ€™ve seen
Why do I have to be lonely?
How do we all become so sad?
Yes sheâ€™s a thing of such beauty
But her beautyâ€™s not there to be owned
As sheâ€™s walking sheâ€™s so alone
Does she know that as sheâ€™s walking
The world is smiling oh so graceful she fills with beauty
Becoming lovely for love
Jobim & de Moraes â€“ translated Adam & Slater
Article written by Mal Adam
Mal Adam and Chris Slater have re-translated some Tom Jobim's songs, which are available on the new CD Nova Jobim from Puratone Recordings. You can listen to selections and buy the CD at http://www.puratone.co.uk. Comments are welcome at email@example.com.